MAN CHILD

12-panel storyboard · render mode · from pitch/treatment pages · Jul 17 2026 · Quinn Hawking / Blue Samurai

01WIDEEXT. CEDAR PITTS MAIN STREET
Panel 1

A dusty sedan rolls into a sun-bleached small town with half-alive storefronts, Mark slumped at the wheel with the failed city visible in his rearview mirror.

02CLOSE-UPINT. SEDAN
Panel 2

Mark's hands grip the steering wheel in silence as his phone buzzes with industry rejection and he kills the screen.

03MEDIUMEXT. CARVER HOUSE
Panel 3

Mark climbs the porch as Joan opens the door with a measuring smile, team photos and trophies of his legendary coach father visible behind her.

04WIDEINT. NIXON MIDDLE SCHOOL GYM
Panel 4

Von Carver stands commanding at center court in fluorescent light, whistle around his neck, as Mark appears frozen in the doorway.

05CLOSE-UPINT. SEDAN / VON'S DEMAND
Panel 5

Mark recoils from Von's cutting words as the weight of family obligation and his father's singular success with children crushes down on him.

06WIDEEXT. EMPTY BLEACHERS - LATE AFTERNOON
Panel 6

Adult Mark sits alone in golden light when Little Mark (12, mischievous) materializes beside him, visible only to Mark as background parents remain oblivious.

07CLOSE-UPINT. JEFFERSON MIDDLE GYM
Panel 7

Rival coach Ronnie Naismith's smirk and swagger burn with old Gatorade humiliation as he watches Mark like prey returned home.

08MEDIUMEXT. NIXON MIDDLE - AFTERNOON PRACTICE
Panel 8

Kids' league chaos erupts with whistles and sneakers as Mark half-coaches and half-films on a cheap camera while Little Mark directs with invisible hand signals.

09WIDEINT. GYM / MAKESHIFT FILM SET - NIGHT
Panel 9

Cheap practicals transform into movie lights as Mark operates the camera and the gym blurs into a film set, with Little Mark grinning from an invisible director's chair.

10MEDIUMINT. COFFEE COUNTER
Panel 10

Diana Burke, pregnant and grounded, slides Mark a coffee with sarcastic warning as a road-not-taken that forces his choice.

11MEDIUMEXT. NIXON MIDDLE - GOLDEN HOUR
Panel 11

Von and Mark stand together at center court in soft-focus golden light with kids around them, sharing one quiet father-son moment as Little Mark nods from the baseline.

12CLOSE-UPEXT. NIXON MIDDLE - GOLDEN HOUR / RESOLUTION
Panel 12

Mark and Little Mark laugh together in joyful rebellion as the final lesson about dignity and manhood lands between father and son.